For our writing today in Miss Roger's Writing Class we had to describe how a person from our storytelling story 'The Wayfinder' was feeling when they were out of food and water while voyaging across the ocean in search of new land on their canoe. I have not really specified who I have chosen, just a person ravenous for food. The purpose of this, was to improve our description skills as that is what we are working on this term. Down below is my paragraph that we had to write in 5 minutes for how the person is feeling being being starved out in the middle of no where. Because we only did have 5 minutes, I did not have a chance to write too much. Has there ever been a time when you were super hungry that you thought you were about to die?
I am Famished, I Am Dying - Painfully
My drawl is now a snake, slithering down my chin, landing on my chest. I have been trying to think of when I last ate for 9 hours now by my brain is a pom pom, frizzy and useless. The after taste of the fish I ate 3 weeks ago has now left my quivering mouth. My stomach is as empty as a termite infested lemon tree, as hallow as a rip of Easter Egg. Oh those kumura I am forever dreaming, those banana's I am forever craving.